Why? Why am I seeing “But,” everywhere? Are writers following the pause = comma rule?
Also, prey does not mean the same thing as pray.
Name checks so characters’ names are consistently spelled would be nice. One character in the $0.99 book I wasted time and money on — yes, I resent both, given how crappy the book was — is both Alisha and Alicia.
Uncomfort is not a word. Discomfort is.
“Civil law” is not an area of specialization. Calling it one is like calling biology a specialization in the field of research; it’s still a very broad category.
Direct address commas really do matter.
Consistent use of dashes for compound words would be nice; doing it right for one word right next to another that is ignored is jarring.
“Really” contributes no value to sentences in professional writing and should be cut every time.
Maybe now that’s out of my system I’ll be able to settle into a good book?